The Outline
The main character is Daniel. He have already married and have three children. He loves his familly, especially his children. He invents traveling zoo to his home for the birthday present oh his children. However, his wife hates his this habit. Daniel always spend too much money to so many things!! At last, his wife lost her temper, and decided to divorce. The children was taken by his wife because Daniel can't support his children. He can meet them only one time in one week. From thet day, he has to live without his angel!!
At the first, Daniel can live alone. But, gradually he can't stand! He is beside himself with loneliness. He really wants to meet his children everyday.
So, he desided to meet to his children secretly. At first, he began to dress himself in female clothing because he wants to be a housemaid of his wife house. If he can work in the former wife's house, he can see his children every day. It is happiest situstion for him.
However, there is one big problem. At the first of Daniel's ner working, he found his former wife has a boyfriend. They looks very happy when they are together. It is possible of former wofe to get second married soon. If the expectation might come true Daniel never meet to his children!! How unfortunately! He decided to break the good relationship of his former wife and her boyfriend...
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Wednesday, October 29, 2008
Wednesday, October 15, 2008
My favotite places (rewrite)
I don't like going to anywhere so much. I want to stay in my room. Especially during this summer I really didn't want to go amywhere. However the season is changing. Fall is good time to do something, It is not too hot, not too cold. So I would like to go somewhere.
I am from Kagoshima, so I don't know about the places of Kumamoto. So, I asked my friends 'Which places do you recommend?' My friends tald me some places, Kumamoto castle, Suizenji park and Kumamoto hardor. I have already been the two places of three. And I will write about teo places, and write down about one place.
The first place is Kumamoto Castle. This castle is very traditionally. I can feel the dignity through the decoration. In the castle, there are so many pictures and historical metarials. My hometown, Kagoshima, doesn't have Castle, has only castle wall. It's a little lonely. So many people visit Kumamoto castle. It is very lively. It's so good for ecomnomy of Kumamoto. There are many kind of trees, cherry, maple, ginkgo and pine. The castle can change the look every season. Furthermore, you can enter the castle. Would you like to climb the top? You can look down the Kumamoto city!!! If the weather is sunny, the scene is excellent!!! You can see the KGU, too.
The second place is Suizenji park. I think it is as beautiful as Kumamoto castle. It is near to KGU. In this park, you cam see a temple, beautiful hills and stalls, and big lake. This park has some entrances. You can choose, but you need pay entrance fee. At the temple, you will be able to drow fortune. You can get also English fortune, It is for forigner. And, you might buy feed for carp in the lake. If you get the feed, you can watch so many carps in the lake!! Let' try!! Suijenji Park is really beatutiful!! I have ont hear about Suizenji park while I was in Kagoshima. However, this park is one of the most famous places in Kumamoto. You should go to the park at least one time!!
The third place is Kumamoto harbor. I have not visited here, but my friend, Tussie, recommend this places. If you go there, you can do angling! There are always spme people who is angling. Furthermore, the scene from the bank is so beautiful! If you are lucky, you can see so beautiful sunset. The harbor is a little far from KGU, but it is worth visiting an once. Would you challenge?
I always think that I want to go somewhere, but I don't go because I am tired of going. Some my friends ask me to go somewhere, but I refuse. However. through this essay, I felt going somewhere is good opputunity for new experiences. My hometown Kagoshima has famous and beautiful places, and Kumamoto also has wonderful places! I know the truth through other student's blog. There are more places in Kumamoto. In this winter vacation and next spring vacation, I would like to go somewhere alonw or with other people. And is I have oppotunity, I will write about new places in my blog. Please waiting for my memories ☆
(542words)
I am from Kagoshima, so I don't know about the places of Kumamoto. So, I asked my friends 'Which places do you recommend?' My friends tald me some places, Kumamoto castle, Suizenji park and Kumamoto hardor. I have already been the two places of three. And I will write about teo places, and write down about one place.
The first place is Kumamoto Castle. This castle is very traditionally. I can feel the dignity through the decoration. In the castle, there are so many pictures and historical metarials. My hometown, Kagoshima, doesn't have Castle, has only castle wall. It's a little lonely. So many people visit Kumamoto castle. It is very lively. It's so good for ecomnomy of Kumamoto. There are many kind of trees, cherry, maple, ginkgo and pine. The castle can change the look every season. Furthermore, you can enter the castle. Would you like to climb the top? You can look down the Kumamoto city!!! If the weather is sunny, the scene is excellent!!! You can see the KGU, too.
The second place is Suizenji park. I think it is as beautiful as Kumamoto castle. It is near to KGU. In this park, you cam see a temple, beautiful hills and stalls, and big lake. This park has some entrances. You can choose, but you need pay entrance fee. At the temple, you will be able to drow fortune. You can get also English fortune, It is for forigner. And, you might buy feed for carp in the lake. If you get the feed, you can watch so many carps in the lake!! Let' try!! Suijenji Park is really beatutiful!! I have ont hear about Suizenji park while I was in Kagoshima. However, this park is one of the most famous places in Kumamoto. You should go to the park at least one time!!
The third place is Kumamoto harbor. I have not visited here, but my friend, Tussie, recommend this places. If you go there, you can do angling! There are always spme people who is angling. Furthermore, the scene from the bank is so beautiful! If you are lucky, you can see so beautiful sunset. The harbor is a little far from KGU, but it is worth visiting an once. Would you challenge?
I always think that I want to go somewhere, but I don't go because I am tired of going. Some my friends ask me to go somewhere, but I refuse. However. through this essay, I felt going somewhere is good opputunity for new experiences. My hometown Kagoshima has famous and beautiful places, and Kumamoto also has wonderful places! I know the truth through other student's blog. There are more places in Kumamoto. In this winter vacation and next spring vacation, I would like to go somewhere alonw or with other people. And is I have oppotunity, I will write about new places in my blog. Please waiting for my memories ☆
(542words)
Wednesday, October 8, 2008
My Favorite Place
I don't like going to anywhere so much. I want to stay in my room. Especially during this summer I really didn't want to go amywhere. However the season is changing. Fall is good time to do something, It is not too hot, not too cold. So I would like to go somewhere.
At the first, I want to go shopping. These days, I don't go to shop because I never cook. But Japanese fall has a lot of delicious food. I should challenge cooking!!
Secound, I want to go Kyoto to watch maples. I think Kyoto is the best place for autumn. I don't knoue as I con go to Kyoto, at least I would like to watch maple in somewhere. Are there grate places in Kumamoto? I will ask my friends.
At the last, I want to go to the theater because I love movie. Recently, we have good movies in this autumn. It is good chance. I reqlly want to laugh and cry many time through many movies.
(171words)
At the first, I want to go shopping. These days, I don't go to shop because I never cook. But Japanese fall has a lot of delicious food. I should challenge cooking!!
Secound, I want to go Kyoto to watch maples. I think Kyoto is the best place for autumn. I don't knoue as I con go to Kyoto, at least I would like to watch maple in somewhere. Are there grate places in Kumamoto? I will ask my friends.
At the last, I want to go to the theater because I love movie. Recently, we have good movies in this autumn. It is good chance. I reqlly want to laugh and cry many time through many movies.
(171words)
Fall Activity
I always catch a cold when summer changes to autumn. So I have to take care of it. I will do hand-washing. And in this fall, I will practice playing music. This winter I have music concert an Kenritu gekijyo. The clasical musics a liitle difficult to play, so I must plactice so hard.
Furthermore, Japanese has a lot of good food for fall. For example, kaki, grape, sanma, matutake and so on.. I will enjoy good taste in Japan!!
(80 words)
Furthermore, Japanese has a lot of good food for fall. For example, kaki, grape, sanma, matutake and so on.. I will enjoy good taste in Japan!!
(80 words)
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