My favotite places (rewrite)

I don't like going to anywhere so much. I want to stay in my room. Especially during this summer I really didn't want to go amywhere. However the season is changing. Fall is good time to do something, It is not too hot, not too cold. So I would like to go somewhere.


I am from Kagoshima, so I don't know about the places of Kumamoto. So, I asked my friends 'Which places do you recommend?' My friends tald me some places, Kumamoto castle, Suizenji park and Kumamoto hardor. I have already been the two places of three. And I will write about teo places, and write down about one place.


The first place is Kumamoto Castle. This castle is very traditionally. I can feel the dignity through the decoration. In the castle, there are so many pictures and historical metarials. My hometown, Kagoshima, doesn't have Castle, has only castle wall. It's a little lonely. So many people visit Kumamoto castle. It is very lively. It's so good for ecomnomy of Kumamoto. There are many kind of trees, cherry, maple, ginkgo and pine. The castle can change the look every season. Furthermore, you can enter the castle. Would you like to climb the top? You can look down the Kumamoto city!!! If the weather is sunny, the scene is excellent!!! You can see the KGU, too.


The second place is Suizenji park. I think it is as beautiful as Kumamoto castle. It is near to KGU. In this park, you cam see a temple, beautiful hills and stalls, and big lake. This park has some entrances. You can choose, but you need pay entrance fee. At the temple, you will be able to drow fortune. You can get also English fortune, It is for forigner. And, you might buy feed for carp in the lake. If you get the feed, you can watch so many carps in the lake!! Let' try!! Suijenji Park is really beatutiful!! I have ont hear about Suizenji park while I was in Kagoshima. However, this park is one of the most famous places in Kumamoto. You should go to the park at least one time!!


The third place is Kumamoto harbor. I have not visited here, but my friend, Tussie, recommend this places. If you go there, you can do angling! There are always spme people who is angling. Furthermore, the scene from the bank is so beautiful! If you are lucky, you can see so beautiful sunset. The harbor is a little far from KGU, but it is worth visiting an once. Would you challenge?


I always think that I want to go somewhere, but I don't go because I am tired of going. Some my friends ask me to go somewhere, but I refuse. However. through this essay, I felt going somewhere is good opputunity for new experiences. My hometown Kagoshima has famous and beautiful places, and Kumamoto also has wonderful places! I know the truth through other student's blog. There are more places in Kumamoto. In this winter vacation and next spring vacation, I would like to go somewhere alonw or with other people. And is I have oppotunity, I will write about new places in my blog. Please waiting for my memories ☆
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