I have two treasures. One is my family and the other is my musical instrument. I'm going to explain about my two treasures.
First, I love my family. Before I began living by myself, I don't like family. I have to back home on time, and if I am not punctual, I'm always scolded. During my high school life, I hoped to live alone in another prefecture. However, after starting school, I sometimes miss my family. I realized the importance of my family. In summer vacation or long holidays, I go back to Kagoshima. Sometimes, I don't like to live alone in Kumamoto because classes and part time jobs. But I can feel better when I see my family in Kagoshima. I rethink I have to keep going to the end. My family is the source of my energy.
Second, I explain my other treasure. It's Mandolin cello. Cello is the symbol of my university life. To buy this treasure was a little hard for me, but I couldn't give up. My cello is also the symbol of my effort. When I was freshman and sophomore, I spend my all time to play cello. At a result, I lost some credits. One of them is this writing credit!! However! At last I've advanced to junior. I have to think about not only another credits but also employment. I would like to stop thinking only mandolin cello.
It is good to value own treasures, but it's not all. Time is money. I must value my remaining time. Before starting new school time, I set the year's target.
Spring Term: TOEIC 600 score and Kanji Kentei second class
Spring Vacation: MOS
Autumn Term: The skill test of PC third class.
I will do my best for this new target!!
(297 words)
First, I love my family. Before I began living by myself, I don't like family. I have to back home on time, and if I am not punctual, I'm always scolded. During my high school life, I hoped to live alone in another prefecture. However, after starting school, I sometimes miss my family. I realized the importance of my family. In summer vacation or long holidays, I go back to Kagoshima. Sometimes, I don't like to live alone in Kumamoto because classes and part time jobs. But I can feel better when I see my family in Kagoshima. I rethink I have to keep going to the end. My family is the source of my energy.
Second, I explain my other treasure. It's Mandolin cello. Cello is the symbol of my university life. To buy this treasure was a little hard for me, but I couldn't give up. My cello is also the symbol of my effort. When I was freshman and sophomore, I spend my all time to play cello. At a result, I lost some credits. One of them is this writing credit!! However! At last I've advanced to junior. I have to think about not only another credits but also employment. I would like to stop thinking only mandolin cello.
It is good to value own treasures, but it's not all. Time is money. I must value my remaining time. Before starting new school time, I set the year's target.
Spring Term: TOEIC 600 score and Kanji Kentei second class
Spring Vacation: MOS
Autumn Term: The skill test of PC third class.
I will do my best for this new target!!
(297 words)
9 comments:
Hi! It's Miki! I know that you keep at it in club activities or your studies. I will keep supporting you!!:->
Hello, Fumi. I read your essay. It is very interest for me. I want to listen playing cello.
Hammer
Hi Fumi,
I will be checking your essay, so you should first put it in the teishutsubako. Please do that next time. Thanks!
tomeiter:
Thank you your comment!
Thank you Fumi, When is the next mancolin concert? Please write a post about when it will be!
tomeiter:
Next concert will be June 27th in Kenritsu Gekijyou. It's called Music Festival. If you have time, please come to listen!
Your story is very impressive. When I was in San Diego, I missed my family, and suffered from homesick though I could relieve it soon. I know how you feel. I think living alone is a good experience for you.
miki:
Thank you for your comment! Mandolin club is very enjoyful! I want you also to have a good time in your club.
Hammer:
Sometimes, I bring my cello to classroom. If I have opportunity I will play for you.
TUSSIE:
Thank you for your nice comment! My another friend say me to live alone is good chance. Sometimes, I feel sad and miss my family. However I can get better thanks for my friends☆
Hello!
This essay is very good.
Let's try to play "dancing-like suite" hard;)
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